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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well I love the start of this so far. me personally I would love to see Sin and Eddie together. it would be a good story. Can\'t wait for more.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YIPPEY U MADE A SEQUEL!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Eddie Go! I want Eddie/Sin. I\'ll be so pissed off if Zip gets in between those two!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s funny becase Sin wants a guy who acts like Eddie but the thought of being with him never crossed her mind.
I\'m afraid Zip will get in the way between those 2. He obviously had it bad. If it was only about a one-night-fuck he would have found it elsewhere, now wouldn\'t he?
I\'m afraid Zip will get in the way between those 2. He obviously had it bad. If it was only about a one-night-fuck he would have found it elsewhere, now wouldn\'t he?
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ace start. I\'m looking forward to seeing where this one goes. Personally, I\'d like to see Sin and Zip first then Sin and Eddie. Just for a comparison. Although I think Eddie is proving to be a more interesting character. Update soon and well done!
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done in regards to the polar opposites, and the whole comment about \'falling so completely in love, she\'s not going to be able to breathe\' so sweet, and so true.
Keep it up, oh, and a vote for Sin & Eddie ;)
Keep it up, oh, and a vote for Sin & Eddie ;)
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice start, keep up the good work, i am really liking this story line. good job.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good potential, I see. Anyways ah I like it so far. Eddie and Sin should end up together some how is what Im thinking. Possibly something that zip does that makes her become more like eddie and they fall in love through difficult times, possibly a breakup somewhere along the lines, but with difficulty they get back together...
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I\'m loving it already. Now the question is...Zip? or Eddie? I think I\'m going to vote for Eddie...I think that you could do some amazing things with his character by making him interact with Sin. Besides, I feel like its Eddie\'s turn, you know? Sin is everything I hoped she would be.
I have a feeling this one will have as much success as your last.
I have a feeling this one will have as much success as your last.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always an excellent excellent start. Keep up the good work, and update soon.