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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. well Zip seems too cocky to get the girl in the end. I didn\'t finish reading Lianna and Joseph\'s story so maybe i don\'t know the whole history of Zip and Sin. So i\'m going to have to root for the underdog, Eddie. or maybe i could become a character in this story and date him? ;) in any case, keep it up!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You certainly got the “WHOM SHOULD SHE BE WITH?” FEELING. Now I don\'t know with which one I want her to end up.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, damn...now I\'m kind of starting to like Zip. I don\'t want to. I really want Sin to end up with Eddie. But Zip actually remembered all that stuff about her...can\'t wait for the next chapter :D
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting. I\"m really leaning toward Sin hooking up with Zip, the bad boy type really is a turn on. Eddie does seem sweet and nice, but no confidence(that\'s a turn off) Zip is just hott!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter - I just finished discovered this and \"Like a Dream Come True\" and have enjoyed them thoroughly. As far as who belongs together, I\'m definitley in the Sin/Eddie camp, but I\'d love to find out more about Zip and what his deal is.
Can\'t wait for the next update!
Can\'t wait for the next update!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh! This is teribble! Not your story, of course ^_~ I LOVE the second chapter (I have a feeling I\'m going to be saying a lot of that during this story). What\'s terrible is the fact that I REALLY want to see her with Eddie...but Zip confuses me as much as he does Sin. Does he REALLY want to be with her in a serious relationship? Or is he just doing that whole \'nice guy\' thing so he can get in her pants?
I liked the way you had both Sin and Eddie react to hearing the other would be at Lianna\'s dinner. Just these two chapters have been filled with so much possible foreshadowing it\'s enough to make me nearly explode with curiousity.
So, I thank you for the quick update and the wonderful story. Can\'t wait to see what the next chapter has in store for us! ^_^
I liked the way you had both Sin and Eddie react to hearing the other would be at Lianna\'s dinner. Just these two chapters have been filled with so much possible foreshadowing it\'s enough to make me nearly explode with curiousity.
So, I thank you for the quick update and the wonderful story. Can\'t wait to see what the next chapter has in store for us! ^_^
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I am glad to see that Sin is back - she is the perfect lead. Her personality and dynamic character make her interesting and she will most likely be the one who will drive the story.
About who should end up with who - I am torn. Right now Eddie is too bland to be a good match for Sin - he would bore her to tears and she would most likely keep him flustered and embarassed - not always a good thing. But - with some character development (which you\'re great at) he could be a wonderful foil to Sin\'s outgoing personality.
Zip (I\'m torn over him too) I think deserves his own story because he already has the makings of another Joseph, playboy turned ernest lover.
So then it has to be Sin and Eddie... but prehaps it would mix things up a bit by turning the tables so to speak - i.e. keeping Sin daydreaming about Zip while becoming good friends with Eddie, she tries to deny her growing feelings for Eddie until suprise, suprise, Eddie gets a girlfriend. Now Eddie is forced to do the choosing between his comfortable, cookie-cutter sweetie or Sin - his outrageous, funny, dramatic best friend. Poor Eddie has gotten all the rotten luck in your stories and deserves to have more then one girl interested in him.*grin*
Of course I am much better at thinking up story lines then actually writing them so I am content to simply set back and bask in your creative genius. Thanks for sharing your stories with us!
About who should end up with who - I am torn. Right now Eddie is too bland to be a good match for Sin - he would bore her to tears and she would most likely keep him flustered and embarassed - not always a good thing. But - with some character development (which you\'re great at) he could be a wonderful foil to Sin\'s outgoing personality.
Zip (I\'m torn over him too) I think deserves his own story because he already has the makings of another Joseph, playboy turned ernest lover.
So then it has to be Sin and Eddie... but prehaps it would mix things up a bit by turning the tables so to speak - i.e. keeping Sin daydreaming about Zip while becoming good friends with Eddie, she tries to deny her growing feelings for Eddie until suprise, suprise, Eddie gets a girlfriend. Now Eddie is forced to do the choosing between his comfortable, cookie-cutter sweetie or Sin - his outrageous, funny, dramatic best friend. Poor Eddie has gotten all the rotten luck in your stories and deserves to have more then one girl interested in him.*grin*
Of course I am much better at thinking up story lines then actually writing them so I am content to simply set back and bask in your creative genius. Thanks for sharing your stories with us!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo!!! more of the saga! Love it! They\'re so opposite yet so alike! I\'m dying to see how Lianna and Joseph are hanging too! Love the writing!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was so good. I read Like A Dream Come True almost religiously and I have to say, this story keeps the plot going perfectly. keep it up, I wanna see Sin and Eddie had some action...finally! preferably with each other.