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Reviewing chapter 20, Tirch, oh Tirch, where for art thou Tirch, hahaha. “Where is your boy tonight? I hope he is a gentleman. Maybe he won\'t find out what I know: you were the last good thing about this part of town.” This lyric is a song by the Fall Out Boy. Every time Zip asks Sin where Eddie is that song just popped into my head. I’m being silly today, sorry. I think Zip is still selfish when it comes to love but he’ll eventually learn right. He had his chance but I do feel for him. Thanks for putting Lianna and Joseph in this chapter, I truly and sincerely appreciated it. Joseph is the bomb. He’s going to be the coolest dad eveeeeerrrr. Love the chapter and you are cruel with that cliff hanger. Thanks for updating.

I don\'t know if I have reviewed before, but I am enjoying this story. I just got caught up on the last 4 chapters and I like where it is going.

its about time Sin tells Eddie she loves him. i\'ve been waiting forever. I knew she was going to say it after she spoke about the way Zip looks at her, that is the same way she looks at Eddie. Anyway, good chapter. Can\'t wait for the next one.

*exhales sharply*

Holy shit! These cliffhangers will be the end of me! Okay, so is she going to break up with him to give Zip another chance, or is she going to tell him that she loves him? \'Cause it\'s gotta be one or the other. ARGH!!!

God damit! you better not be making sin going with zip and breaking up with eddie, or having zip/sin have sex or something like that, damit!

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

WHEW! hehehe... you are teh ebil! :P but i just loved loved LOVED that chapter ;) on hindsight, i suppose i should have expected that, given how Sin was so scared of saying the L-word before. You write wonderfully, and I can\'t wait to read your next fic. Yay for Sin and Eddie! :D

im at the edge of the cliff here........

i hate zip.

um...i\'m fine with sin breaking up with eddie now and going to zip, but along the way i hope she realizes what a big mistake she\'s made and goes back to eddie. i don\'t think i can take sin and zip being together until the very end. i want sin and eddie! or if you decide you don\'t want sin and eddie, i hope she just drops both then. i don\'t want to see a completely heartbroken eddie...unless of course you bring into the picture the perfect girl for eddie...he certainly deserves it. what he does not deserve is a heartbreak.