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Heh, dont worry about me. I\'ll be fine. Onto the chapter review though!

A much more enjoyable chapter, in my opinion. Those feelings of Zip being a jackass are slowly diminishing (why, I dont know...). Keep up the good work. Oh, and that whole secrecy thing between Sin and Eddie? Love it;)

WOOOOO!! Another story! I love it alreaday... Hun don\'t worry about the introduction part... it\'s still great. HMMM I have nothing really to say except I can\'t wait to see what Sin, Zip, and Eddie get into. I will make longer reviews once the story gets going! Can\'t wait to see it updated.

Kali

Still poppin, you still got it gurl, keep goin :)

as always well done on this chapter...but...I HAVE ONE COMPLAINT!... u took too logn to update! u MUST BE PUNISHED! (slaps Tirch in the back) MEANIE!

I\'m really glad that you decided to do a story about sin. I read the story you wrote about Joseph and Lianna. And i really liked the character Sin. She seems real. Someone i can totally picture walking down the street. I like the fact that she has feelings for Zip and there is something there for Eddie. It makes it more confusing and fun to read. Love it so far. Keep it up!

It just made him feel more boring, more generic, more… vanilla.
I had to put that in there. I love that line. Its great. Awsome. I could go on and on about that one particular sentance, but I dont think thats what you really want me to review;)
Ok, so I was a little slow in getting to the end of your last story and the start of this one because I had to have an emergency appendectomy, which sucked, but now Im making up for lost time if none of you oblige.
The premise of this story... doesnt do it for me as much as your other stories do. Im not saying that this first chapter was poorly written, thats not the case at all. What I am saying is I just dont see this working. I have my own ideas on where I would take this story, but I will hold back on what those are to see if I am right in the coming chapters. For now, just keep up the good work and dont stop writing. Some of us are waiting for more on some of your other stories. *coughs* Why Bother *coughs* Just a freindly hint;)

Ew. I just dont like Zip. At all. I always liked Joseph, just because of the way he was presented and started out as the kind of fun character a story can have... but Zip is just... not my type I suppose. Not a bad chapter though, but you\'re being the dastardly devil that I want you to be. We think alike I suppose *grins*. Keep it up.

Reviewing chapter 1 and 2. Great start and I can see that it will get very complicated soon. Sin has to choose between two guys who are completely different. To be honest I don’t know who Sin should choose it’s too soon to decide, but I am rooting for Eddie because readers already know him from the previous story. But Zip seems sincere in starting over with Sin and wanting a relationship. Right now Eddie is just an acquaintance but once Zip goes on tour I hope it would be a good time for Eddie to get to know Sin better. Eddie seems to make her feel good about herself and Zip is from her past who was once a jerk but then she was never honest with her feelings toward Zip. I need to stop debating myself anyways Joseph watching Oprah didn’t make me laugh until you said it was a special on “When Your Mother Drives You Crazy”. I don’t know why I find that so funny. Thanks for updating.

We\'ll you\'re successfully managing to get the whole \'which boy\' will-she-won\'t-she\' kinda thing going, very nicely indeed. But I am resolutely sticking to my guns for Eddies sake, I think they are purrrfect for eachother! Despite the fact that you are making Zip more human that the walking penis he appeared to be before ;)

Keep it up sugar, you\'re doing great!

Im not sure if I want to like Zip or hate ZIp because you never know what his intentions are! haha. Love the writing! I hope that Eddie and Sin do end up complimenting each other... the wild one gets tamed and the tamed gets a little wild! lol