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for Original Sin

by Tirch

person rukki
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really interest in the story between zip and sin. I read the previous story with joseph and lianna but...all that was revealed about sin and zip was that they had an relationship when they were young. So what exactly went down. How did sin realize that she needed more than just a fuck from zip? Is zip trying the \"joseph\" way of getting back in a relationship after a fuck-up. This story is the long age battle between the Bad guy who girls want to reform and the nice guy who always finish last. I am really interested in how this is gonna go down.
person Wolf
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.....M.....G!!! Go Eddie GO! You got her man!! She\'s the one for you! I KNOW IT! Just kick Zip\'s ass if he tries to get in your way!

P.S.

I’ve got beer, vodka, rum, tequila. What’s your poison?”

BRILLIANTLY FUNNY!

Email me, lets talk :D
person GirlFixer
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving this story! I really really really like Sin (I\'m a hot topic girl myself) and I think she makes for good reading. And I can\'t wait for the update on Why Bother? I love that story! I\'ve missed it :P
person Lady Rain
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
See what happens when you think you\'ve got time to take for worka nd home? You miss out on already three chapters to a great story!
I am loving this! Nothing really big to say right now except it sounds as if maybe Zip\'s trying to be like Joseph, thinking it\'ll bag him a loyal and fun girl like Lianna in Sin. I can\'t see him being bound ot her really, though whatever time they might spend would be fun and wonderful, the moment hard times hit he\'d blow it and she\'d be single and angry again.

But Eddie, now he\'s actually a far betetr match for her. I can even envision him getting his ear pierced again and letting her convince him to get a tattoo.

Okay gonna go on now. But I shall be back, yes I shall.
person cukid9
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Vastly amusing chapter...toward the end anyway. I must say, I sighed a breath of relief when Sin high-tailed it out of Zip\'s apartment ^_^

And hurray for \'Why Bother?\'! ^_^ Look forward to seeing updates on both stories!
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the series - and am so glad you\'re doing a sequel. I know this is Sin\'s story, but please please - if she _doesn\'t_ end up with Eddie, then could he end up with someone too?
person Joee
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just thought I would say that I LOVE your stories, keep writing and I will keep reading.
person Mina
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Zip he just wants to get invited to dinner...he definitely needs his own spinoff...luv the story!
person Willow Dean
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
stop making me like Zip! Great chapter :D
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot! i dont know why eddie seems like the sweet nice guy! and i\'m sure if him and sin get togethor a diffrent side will come out! but hopefully zip and sin will hook up atleast once!

and i just have to say YESSSSSSSS! about \'why bother\' everytime i get on here i check to see if you\'ve updated! so i\'m pretty stoked about that! keep up the good work