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This was a really good chapter, even if it was a little dark. I think that even though Sin and Eddie are so different they would make a great couple. Some times its the most opposite people that make the best relationships. Keep it up!

Another great chapter. You do a great job of pulling your readers into the story, whether they particuarlly like some of the characters or not;) Like I said before, I like the whole secrecy thing between Sin and Eddie. Keep that up, it can lead to a lot. Keep up the writing, cant wait for the next chapter.

Excellent work! excellent! I may not be as nice a guy as eddie, but I do try to. and I\'ve wondered, much like him, why nice guys seem to finish last. Though lately I\'ve come to think of that as referring to sex, and to finish is to reach orgasm. I\'m sorry, I went off on a tangent. anyway, I\'m off to read chapter 2.

Isn\'t that like Eddie? Gets to sleep with the girl... just doesn\'t get to bat. Love the story! (P.S. Heroin doesn\'t have an \'e\' on the end)

Wow...ok, not a great fan of Eddie in the last story, but damn...I am so rooting for him now. Take Zip to spin-off central, cuz this has got to be a Sin/Eddie story. They are the perfect example of opposites attract. Their personalities just seem to grow off one another. As sincere as Zip may be about Sin, I don\'t think he\'s what Sin needs to bring her back to being a whole person again. Just my opinions...hope they help and looking forward to more.

Another good chapter. oh, I do hope sin gets paired with Eddie. I understand full well that people deserve forgiveness and a chance to change, and that Zip could very well be a better person than he was once upon a time, but I made some mistakes in a relationship...she\'s still my friend, but dammit if I can\'t forgive myself. it was nothing like cheating on her or anything, but somehow I got it into my head it was ok to be a jerk. those were my worst moments. Anyway, I\'d never give myself another chance if I were her, and I\'m sure she feels the same way. I just hope Sin feels that way about zip and is strong enough to hold on...

I totally felt this one was gonna end with a kiss of some sort, but I\'m glad it didn\'t. It\'d be way too soon for them. But wow, Eddie is finally realizing it\'s okay to be a good guy.

And I love Sin\'s nicknames for him! He shouldn\'t complain, I had a boy friend once who called me all those annoyingly disgusting pet names, like shnookums and cuddle bunny. Yeah, he thinks he\'s got it bad. He has no clue!!
(and hell yes I dumped that guy with a quickness.)

Okay so I\'m like all ready for that next chap, so bring it on when you\'re ready!

Another good chapter! yay for eddy! yay for sin not staying with zip! boo for zip! anyway, gonna go onto the next one.

Alright, I started reading from the beginning, and now I\'ve caught up with the story. now I\'m gonna be biting my nails, chewing my cheek, and other bad habits while impatiently waiting for the next chapter. I like the way things are going with eddy and sin...and...I\'ve got tears in my eyes...tears of rage...I can\'t believe a mother would do that to her child...

i love it