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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU KNOW HOW IM TRYING TO CONTROL THE STORY LINE!!!???... IT JUST PROVES HOW MUCH IVE COME TO LOVE YOUR STORY... AND THAT MEANS A LOT BECAUSE I DONT USUALLY REVIEW THIS MUCH!!!... o.O EVERY TIME I TRY TO CONTROL AGAIN, JUST SMACK ME ON THE HEAD WITH A BASE BALL BAT!!!!!!!...
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing chapters 5, 6 and 7. You are so awesome for updating this often. Going back to school that’s out of state is my excuse for not being able to read and review recently, sorry. Finally both Sin and Eddie realize they have feelings for each other. It is so unfair when you make both Eddie and Zip likable in their own way. I feel sorry for Zip and Eddie because in the beginning and the end someone always gets hurt. On a lighter note, I absolutely loved the scene when Lianna told Joseph she finds him sexy using words such as concession and Anthropomorphic. That made me laugh and they are so cute together. Thanks for updating.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It just gets better and better as it goes on. I still can\'t keep up with your updates cause the last time I checked there were still five chapters. I don\'t remember when that was. Neways, keep up the great work and update soon.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And here I am confused again. Not sure who to choose. They are both hurting badly to be with her. But on the other hand Sin is beginning to feel something else than friendship for Eddie. Or is it only her ego speaking, not understanding this male doesn\'t respond to her like the others before him did?
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter.. seems like they have a very twisted path to walk.... Okay, you\'re a tease, but boy can you write!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re stories are great, I love them. This story is really good, keeps the person reading hanging and you can never guess what coming next. Keep Writing!!!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your lucky I can\'t reach through this monitor and kill you.. I can only wait so long for something to happen. Make them spill the beans about each other (Eddie and sin) would ya already! GEEZ.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO THE HELL AWAY ZIP! tirch, when do u think either sin or eddie will confess their love? ITS KILLING ME DAMIT!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, Sin how could you! well...okay I know how, but still...
oh she just set herself up big time, and now it\'s gonna take twice as long for her and Eddie to hook up.
Have I mentioned I don\'t much like waiting....
I\'ll have to write more on my next review cause I just got home from work and my brain is fried. I\'m just happy I can still read. ^_^
So long, fare thee well, pip pip cheerio, I\'ll be back soon! (a line from one of my fave songs in the classic movie Oliver!)
oh she just set herself up big time, and now it\'s gonna take twice as long for her and Eddie to hook up.
Have I mentioned I don\'t much like waiting....
I\'ll have to write more on my next review cause I just got home from work and my brain is fried. I\'m just happy I can still read. ^_^
So long, fare thee well, pip pip cheerio, I\'ll be back soon! (a line from one of my fave songs in the classic movie Oliver!)
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(cries) u better not make it zip/sin /cries I WANT EDDIE/SIN! THEY BELONG TOGETHER U MEANIE!