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I vote Origianl Sin. Please I can\'t hang in limbo wondering if Eddie is going to get the girl and if Ava ends up with Zip somehow.

WHY BOTHER WHY BOTHER WHY BOTHER.....plllllllllease? It\'s my favorite of alllll your stories and the plot is sooooo goood

\"Original Sin\" please! i\'m following both stories, but since Jo and Jake just got back together in \"Why Bother?\" i\'m more anxious to see how Sin/Eddie/Zip pan out first.

and you love to write, i love to read what you write. ^_^ and i\'m sure many others can say the same so it works out for everyone, right? you\'re an awesome writer, thanks for keeping it so entertaining!

love the story so far. wud appreciate its culmination at the earliest.
thanx for all the hard work and excellent writing

I love this story so do this one first!!

YOURE EVIL!!! YOU EVIL PERSON!!!!!!!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAAHAHA!!!!!!! I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH GREAT NOW IM ACTING ALL CHILDISH AGAIN BUT I WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATE IT IF YOU WOULD UPDATE ANOTHER CHAPTER BY THE END OF SATURDAY, OR EVEN BETTER, TOMMOROW!!!... ^-^ PLEEEEEEAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEE???

i think you should go with \"Why Bother\" because it\'s been out longer than Original Sin and you had that hiatus. Don\'t get me wrong, I love Original Sin, but I am curious as to how Joanne and Jake eventually break up and what happens to Eve. (I have a feeling she dies *tear*)

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
Don\'t put this one on hold, I swear I\'ll have a hissy fit!

Can you count each please as one vote??? *GRIN*

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*Doing the \'update now please!!?\' dance...* OMFG!!! THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!... I LOVE ZIP SOOO MUCH NOW!!! BUT I WANT HIM TO SUFFER A BIT WHEN HE GETS BACK... SOMETHING LIKE THIS:
SIN: \"IM SORRY ZIP... IM WITH EDDIE NOW...\"
ZIP: \"HOLY CRAP!!! WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED WHEN I WAS GONE!!!???\" O_O

BTW... PERSONALLY I THINK ALL THE REVIEWERS ARENT BEING THAT FAIR... THEYRE BEGGING AND PLEADING FOR YOU TO WRITE THE STORY THE WAY THEY WANT IT TO TURN OUT... BUT ITS YOUR STORY... NOT THEIRS!!!... I THINK YOU SHOULD WRITE IT THE WAY YOU LIKE... DONT LISTEN TO ANYONE!!!... BUT I WOULD LIKE ZIP TO HAVE A CHANCE WITH SIN... *SMACKS MYSELF ON THE HEAD* OMG!!! NOW IM SUCH A HYPOCRITE!!! IM TELLING PEOPLE NOT TO TAKE CONTROL OF THE STORY AND NOW IM DOING IT!!! IM SO SORRY!!!!!!!... *BOWS HEAD IN SHAME*