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I really like your \"original sin\" so I think you should work on it first!

i\'d like you to finish original sin first, please

Just a few things...The \'Maybe she can just sense it on me,\' line and Madison\'s \'Ooo choose Eddie...he never gets the girl,\' had me cracking up! I think I saw that exact line in one of your reviews lol

Don\'t worry about angst. I actually love reading yours, I think because it\'s so emotionally heart-wrenching most of the time I can\'t pull myself away from it. Also, I was on edge through the whole beginning of the chapter...and then I was just like \'Aw, c\'mon! They didn\'t admit their feelings and hump like rabbits?\' *sigh* I\'m not disappointed...I just can\'t STAND the tension! The suspense is KILLING me...I hope it lasts ^_^

Great work! Although, I must say, that Zip is starting to creep me out a little. I mean, he\'s just SO adament about them being together. I dunno...if a guy had said something like that to me, I\'d probably freak a little and wonder if he was starting to become just a wee bit obssessive. I\'m not saying he is...I\'m just saying it\'s creepy ^_^

I love this story! Please finish it first!

So I am reading both of them....and this one has me slightly more hooked...so I am voting for original sin to be finished first. I like it when you build your stories off of a previous and since I really got into Lianna and Joseph\'s story I want to see what happens to the rest of them.

Reviewing chapter 8, can Eddie be more sweeter and it’s so frustrating when readers know how Sin and Eddie feel about each other yet they are both in denial. The story isn’t too angsty. Thanks for updating.

It was a tough decision for me to decide but I picked “Original Sin” because you said something definitive was going to happen in the next two chapters or something like that. I’m glad you love writing and it shows in your stories. I love reading it because it has substance. Thanks for considering our opinions.

i think you should finish Orginal Sin first because it is really good but it is also driving me nuts to find out what happens so could you finidh that one first pu pu please thanks very much .....Lindsey aka Skeezo

Original sin is a great story! please keep up the wonderful work!

I just saw your authors note about having to pick one story to finish first, and I have to vote \"Original Sin\"! This is one of the few romances where I truly don\'t know who the girl will end up with, and you\'ve actually made both Eddie and Zip likable. Personally, I hope it\'s Eddie. Anyway, please finish this one first! It\'s such a joy to see a new chapter up on my recommended reading list.

So I read your Author\'s Note when I went to read \"Why Bother?\", I like that story and \"Original Sin\" but I have got to sya that I think the story \"Original Sin\" has a slight edge over \"Why Bother?\". I like both stories and am always thrilled to see when one or both of the stories are updated. Frankly you are a truly great writer. You have not only enticed us with these truly great stories but now you are letting us decide which one we would like to have finished first. I know of few writers who would give their audiences that kind of power. The story \"Why Bother?\" I thought was great from the very beginning but then it seemed to lag a little. But you have picked up the pace of the story and it is going strong. The story \"Original Sin\" is just so awesome. I still have no idea who you are going to pair together. I mean I have an inkling but you never know. If you do end up putting Sin and Zip together I hope that there will be a spin off story for Eddie and vice versa for Zip. I know that you will go wherever your writing takes you and I can only hope that we can as an audience be more appreciative.