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for Original Sin

by Tirch

person foamyfan15010 (NSI)
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic job so far. I LOVE stories with this kind of plot line, they\'re so suspenseful. Personally, I would choose Eddie. He\'s so sweet and cute, and I think he and Sin (AWESOME name, you\'re so creative!) compliment each other so well. Now, on to your question, I personally love both of your stories and am eager to see how each end, but I think you should pursue this one first. I\'m not sure why, but I\'m really anxious to see who she chooses. So, yeah, that\'s my vote. :o) Good luck with your decision, and, honestly, I\'d be happy with either one, so... No real preference here.
person Cariad
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t begin to read \"Why Bother\" for the moment since I only read one story by an author at the same time, so I\'ll say you finish \"Original Sin\" first
person Muwahahaha
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ORIGINAL SIN!!! you know you gotta finish this series first!!!!!!!!! because Why Bother seems like its in a comfortable chapter right now... but Im dying to figure out what happens on Original Sin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... *flaming eyes of wonder* Hurry up and update THIS one okay!!!!!!!!!!!?????
person fun
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Original Sin!! God, I became entranced in the world of Lianna and Joseph after about 4 seconds of reading it! It\'s so wonderful to have a continuance and your stories are beautifully written!
person ORIGINAL SIN
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DO ORIGINAL SIN FIRST BECAUSE THERE ARE MORE VOTES!!!!!!!...
person sesshy_lover
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHA *COUGH COUGH* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *GRUNT*... IM BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I WANNA SAY THAT ORIGINAL SIN GOES FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I READ WHY BOTHER? AND I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT IM MORE CURIOUS ABOUT HOW THIS FIC WILL END UP FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........ PLEASE DO THIS ONE PLEASSSSSEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????
person grumpirah
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ORIGINAL SIN ALL THE WAY! FINISH THAT ONE FIRST PLEEZ.
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definately continue original sin first
person melia
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ORIGINAL SIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUST MUST MUST!!!

But then again, you are the author and you know best what you will feel like writing =) That part, I have no say...

Oh well, this is just an attempt.
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Tirch... please continue with Original Sin... it\'s getting really interesting