AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Original Sin

by Tirch

person foamyfan15010 (NSI)
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic job so far. I LOVE stories with this kind of plot line, they\'re so suspenseful. Personally, I would choose Eddie. He\'s so sweet and cute, and I think he and Sin (AWESOME name, you\'re so creative!) compliment each other so well. Now, on to your question, I personally love both of your stories and am eager to see how each end, but I think you should pursue this one first. I\'m not sure why, but I\'m really anxious to see who she chooses. So, yeah, that\'s my vote. :o) Good luck with your decision, and, honestly, I\'d be happy with either one, so... No real preference here.
person Cariad
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t begin to read \"Why Bother\" for the moment since I only read one story by an author at the same time, so I\'ll say you finish \"Original Sin\" first
person Muwahahaha
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ORIGINAL SIN!!! you know you gotta finish this series first!!!!!!!!! because Why Bother seems like its in a comfortable chapter right now... but Im dying to figure out what happens on Original Sin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... *flaming eyes of wonder* Hurry up and update THIS one okay!!!!!!!!!!!?????
person fun
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Original Sin!! God, I became entranced in the world of Lianna and Joseph after about 4 seconds of reading it! It\'s so wonderful to have a continuance and your stories are beautifully written!
person ORIGINAL SIN
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DO ORIGINAL SIN FIRST BECAUSE THERE ARE MORE VOTES!!!!!!!...
person sesshy_lover
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHA *COUGH COUGH* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *GRUNT*... IM BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I WANNA SAY THAT ORIGINAL SIN GOES FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I READ WHY BOTHER? AND I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT IM MORE CURIOUS ABOUT HOW THIS FIC WILL END UP FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........ PLEASE DO THIS ONE PLEASSSSSEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????
person grumpirah
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ORIGINAL SIN ALL THE WAY! FINISH THAT ONE FIRST PLEEZ.
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definately continue original sin first
person melia
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ORIGINAL SIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUST MUST MUST!!!

But then again, you are the author and you know best what you will feel like writing =) That part, I have no say...

Oh well, this is just an attempt.
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Tirch... please continue with Original Sin... it\'s getting really interesting

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?