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PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLS FINISH ORIGNAL SIN FIRST ............ITS SO CUTE
I JUST LOVE THE WHOLE DO...ITS GREAT.. I READ ITS PARALELL AS WEL AND I LOVE THAT TOO..............PLS BE NICE AND CONTINUE THIS ONE ....
OH AND JUST SO U KNOW ... CAN WE GET EDDIE AND SIN TOGETHER AND AVA AND ZIP(COZ SHES A SHADOW OF SIN.. BLAH BLAH..)
ANYWAY THATS JUST A THOUGHT THAT CAME TO MY MIND.. BUT PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY.....
OH AND OPRAH IS CUTE AND I AGREE MENSHOULD WATCH IT.. HEHEHE.....

OHHHH!!!!!! I LOVE THE OTHER ONE TOO, BUT ORIGINAL SIN SHOULD COME FIRST!!!!!!!!!!! DEFINATELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF IT DOESNT I WILL STALK YOU UNTIL YOU REGRET EVER NOT FINISHING THAT STORY FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

update this one first or else, I will come for you and do horrible things!!! very very horrible!!! original sin is the bomb!!! and if you even think about updating the other one first I will seriously hurt you... you got that???... okay now that we got things clear... I\'ll let you go on and continue this story... NOW!!!!.... go!!!

I\'m so sorry I havent reviewed for the chapter lately... it\'s because my computer freaked out and i had to get it cleared off and stuff, lol. I know nothing about computers. But i have read this story so far and all I can say is keep writing this one right now. There is so much wonder with this story I would like to know where it goes.

Kali

Definitely original sin

definately Original Sin!!! Im am completely in love with this story... so if I cant have another chapter by tommorow, then I will surely die!!!... lol...

Loving it!!! Please... I chose Original Sin first please... this really was a hard decision though.... maybe even the hardest in my whole life!!! anywho... Original Sin comes first cause everyone likes this a little bit better than Why Bother? but I still like them both, however... Im more curious about Original Sin... and I think you will leave your fans dying if you dont continue it really really soon...

Add another vote for ORIGINAL SIN please!...

Original Sin +1000... that adds as 1000 votes... :)

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WOW!!! Ive never reviewed a story in my whole life on aff!!!... And Im sorry about it too!... heres for all the times that I didnt review this wonderful story... but I mainly did it cause you said you might not work on this for a while... so please choose Original Sin over... ummm... was it Why Bother?... I should probably really read that one as well... anything you write is really really good!!! BTW, good job on Like A Dream Come True, it was Exceptional Work!!!!!!!! I loved it sooooo very much, but I couldn\'t review on that one... so sorry... but please do continue on Original Sin!!! You\'re a great writer!!! Up there with J.K. Rowling on my list!!!!!