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for Original Sin

by Tirch

person sesshy_lover
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING IT MEANT A LOT TO ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND NNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! AN EVIL CLIFFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE SIN AND EDDIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SIN AND ZIP!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGH!!!! I DONT KNOW WHO TO CHOOSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANYWAY... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ying
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
between giddiness (for the update), agony (for the cliffie), and anticipation (for the next chapter) i\'d have to say i\'m thoroughly entertained. lol! thanks for the update and i can\'t wait to see what happens between Sin/Eddie/Zip. it\'s easy to root for Eddie when Zip\'s not around. but Zip can be awfully sweet when he wants to be...damn.

BUT i\'m still rooting for Eddie. he\'s too good a guy to not get the girl AND Zip\'s had his chance. at the VERY least, give Sin/Eddie a shot and let her decide from there.

i have to say i\'d love to see a little sub-plot for Ava...i love that girl! it\'s amazing that you\'ve created three similar characters in Madison, Sin, and Ava, but yet, they\'re still distinctly different. way to go!
person Blue
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!

Finally, but OMG you\'re so mean, bloody Zip, ARGH!!! I held my breath almost through th whole of that chapter, then spat my drink all over my monitor when Zip turned up!

I\'m so torn, so excited & so nervous!!!

Mean Mean Mean Tirch! But of course I\'ll be back *GRIN*
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing chapter 9, this chapter was pretty hot with a lot of sexual tension between Eddie and Sin. This chapter was really good and you didn\'t disappoint. Finally Sin has made a decision. I have a feeling she might let Zip go but I don’t know if he will. Zip is ASSHOLE and Eddie is Opie, Sin is too funny. Thanks for updating. I would also like to thank you on your decision for at least putting up a chapter a week for \"Why Bother\".
person Luminous Blane (2lazy2login)
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to throw Sin, Eddie, and a box of condoms in a room and lock \'em in there for about four hours. knowing how well Sin and Eddie get along, they could probably just exchange life stories, but after a while, they\'d start to run out of things to talk about, and they\'d either admit their feelings or go for the rubbers. I\'d read on to chapter seven now, but I am wiped. it\'s been a long day. My sincerest appologies.
person Memory Chase
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. In fact I love it so much it is torture waiting for updates. Tirch you have a knack for keeping readers interested. I am so ready for something to happen between Eddie and Sin. You are such a tease. In a good way. Keep up the great work. It is truly an awesome story. I can\'t wait for more.
person iotc247
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY YESSSS!!! I was thinking of how to write my final comment on how I hated that you won\'t let something happen, before I strap you down to make something happen.
person CJ
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First time reviewer, long time reader.

Okay, I just want to smack Eddie upside the head. He just needs to kiss her. And I know this is out of character for him, but this nice guy attitude is driving me nuts. And Sin...what\'s a girl to do? I say she kisses Eddie. Haha. That isn\'t out of character for her considering what we know about her and Zip.

Anyway, I love it. Keep up the great work.
person wolf
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
swear to god it better be sin and eddie or ill hit u with a pillow!
person Wolf
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES.YES.YES. awesome!!! go eddie go go go!