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reading through this chapter made me feel a lot of different emotions. At first i wanted to give you a great big huge. Sin and Eddie yeah. Then, when I was so happy for them, my mood went crashing to the floor, and i could have killed u.
I mean you could have given them just one night without Zip showing up. i knew it was inevitable that Zip would return, but they at least should have done the nasty before all the Zip drama. then just leaving it open like that. I don\'t know if i can stand this roller coaster of emotions :). I love it anyway. can\'t wait for more.

Yay :D I\'m glad Sin and Eddie finally kissed - although, I\'d still like to see Zip in action if you know what I mean lol. Sometimes too much lovey dovey fluff can get a bit irritating. Have I ever told you how ace you and your stories are? Cause it\'s flippin\' true :)

I jsut read this again (third time) I FUCKIGN SWEAR ZIP IF U RUIN THIS NITE FOR SIN ILL FUCKING KILL U ON THE SPOT U STUPID BASTARD!!! I SWEAR ILL NEUTER UR STUPID ASS!

haha ur right I wont hit u just yet... but if u let zip ruin this ill hit u hard..

and y the hell havent u emailed me back u big meanie!


lol making him go home with a stupid grin on his face...priceless...eddie/sin!

Wolf

wait after next chapter....U BETTER NOT FUCK UP THEIR RELATION SHIP (SIN/EDDIE) TELL HIM TO FUCK OFF! fuck u zip!

So So, sorry for not reviewing that last chap. Been way busy with you know, that crazy thing I do every day, life. ^_^

But oh man, all I have to say about this chap is Bring it on! Oh man I\'ve been waiting for a kiss to happen between them for soo long, a whole nine, count em, nine chapters already! Way to go!
And I\'d almost needed some ice when I saw Zip enter the scene again and suddenly, good feelings gone.

Man why does he have to all of a sudden try to win her back? Now he\'s gonna see Eddie as competition and start acting like the jealous boyfriend and I can just see Eddie have to grow a serious backbone if he\'s gonna win Sin for good and make sure Zip knows he\'s no longer the man she wants or needs.

Okay so I\'m gonna re-read this chap a couple more times then I think I\'ll do something else for a while, maybe....

OMG YOU UPDATED REALLY FAST!!!!!!!!!!! BUT HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US WITH AN EVIL CLIFFE!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????? PLEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE... UPDATE ORIGINAL SIN JUST ONCE MORE BEFORE YOU DO WHY BOTHER?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????? AND WHOO HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ZIP IS BACK!!!!!... WAIT... ZIP IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????? OMG HOW DID THAT HAPPEN!!!!!!!!!!!????????? AIEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! TELL HIM SIN!!!!!!!!!! TELL HIM THAT YOURE TAKEN BY EDDIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANNA SEE HIS CUTE ADORABLE LITTLE POUTY EXPRESSSION WHEN HE FINDS OUT.. AND HES GONNA GO BERSEERK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EDDIE HAS GOTTA FUCK SIN!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I MEAN NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH GOSH... EVEN SAYING THAT IS SOOO EMBARASING!!!!!!!!!! IS IT ME OR IS IT GETTIN\' HOT IN HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????????????? NOW IF YOU DONT MIND, IM GONNA GO TAKE A COLD DIP IN THE SHOWER!!!!!!!!!

Hmm... I really like this story so far, and you\'ve set up the formal date nicely... but it really wouldn\'t be right for them to get together on the date. That\'d be too normal, and one of the things that really shines in your writing is your quirky sense of humour. So, please - Sin and Eddie, but something unexpected, fun and funny. Neither of them are teases, so just something subtle that makes both of them realise how much more they mean to each other, Great story!

Oh... Poor Eddie. Sin so better choose him. I mean come on... His first love ended up being a lesbian and his second married a rock star. That is not good for his ego. And he is so sweet!!! I wish he was real, because I would so jump him... lol Anyway, great chapter, as usual. You rock and all that happy shit. Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!!

Oh, you are a mean mean author! ^_^ How could you leave it like that?! Like the tension you\'re building in the story isn\'t enough, you have to go and leave us with a terrible cliffy, and then have the nerve to TAUNT us about it!

Ok, with that off my chest...^_^ Outstanding chapter! Eddie and Sin together are just electrifying! I hope it stays that way (you are a tease kinda, you know, with that author\'s note at the bottom...sorry, just had to add that ^_^). Anyway, I still vote for Eddie and Sin, for what it\'s worth ^_^

Continue the wonderful story telling! I\'m not sure it could get any better. As always, you have my complete and undivided attention.