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Whoohoo you finally updated! Man, Sin and Eddie are just so great for each other. Leave it to you, the dramatic writer, to leave us that little blurb about Zip and his STUPIDITY. If I were a character in the story, I\'d walk up to Zip, stuff his head in a blender, and turn it on full power.

Argh! I can already see Eddie learning of their lunch.That is so not going to be pretty.

And the sex was damn good. Feel free to write more of that stuff too

...STAB...ZIP...STAB!!!! *is slapped* I needed that. yet another great chapter! now all we need is for zip to push himself even more and try to rape her, but fail, so she can get him put in jail, and we don\'t have to deal with him anymore! he\'s the kind of person I hate from the depths of my soul. I like the story, don\'t get me wrong, but there\'s only two kinds of people that make my blood really start to boil. people who force their bodies on children...and people who think they can manipulate women, with no real regard to the woman\'s feelings, in other words, people like zip. I\'ve got five bucks if you have him become impotent in the next chapter!

i love this story keep up the good work and update when you can

Eddie and Sin! Eddie and Sin! I hear things are going to get more complicated. I don\'t care as long as Sin doesn\'t sleep with Zip anymore and Sin and Eddie end up together. It would so, so bad if Sin makes a stupid mistake. I am so upset that she\'s going to see Zip. They so need time apart. Sin is stressing me out with the whole Zip thing. I do not, not like Zip. Eddie and Sin! Eddie and Sin!....

Also, loved the love scenes. I wouldn\'t mine one or two more between Eddie and Sin. :-)

i really love this story and this chapter. review soon.

This story is so awesome.... my only complaint... PLEEEEEASE UPDATE! haha I agree with the one up there! (the pillow haha) I absolutely love the relationship between Eddie and Sin they need each other sooooo badly. Grrreeeeat job with character development especially with the prequel to this story! Keep up the good work!

I\'ll admit, I fell way behind. WAAAY behind. So I just spent the afternoon reading all of it, and heres what I have to say.
I\'ll get the gripes out of the way first, as they\'re much easier to write about. None at all.
Now on to the praise. Youre a damned good writer, and dont let anyone ever say otherwise. You can put more emotion into your stories than most of the stories Ive read that have been published. Start writing for a profit, because you can definately do it. You\'ve got the knowledge of how to please (and displease) a reader, and how to make them THINK. Thinking is great, especially from a reader\'s perspective. However, should you heed my advice, DONT STOP WRITING ONLINE EITHER!! This is a great way to develop your abilities. Not only that, I\'d miss the updates on some favorites (and maybe some new favorites, too;) ). Either way, you have to write... or something bad might happen.

What the hell!!! (picks up a heavy pillow) WHY (Thwack)HAVEN\'T (Thwack) YOU (Thwack) UPDATED (Thwack) YET! (Thwack). IT HAS BEEN 2 DAYS! AND YOU PROMISED!

you can only read a chapter so many times b4 u memorise the damn thing ive read chapter 11 like 18 times, update already! NOW!