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*grumbles* ok, so maybe he wasn\'t so bad in this chapter. but I still want to kick him in the nuts while wearing an ice skate. great work this chapter. man, this zach thing should be good. DO WE GET TO SEE KIDS!? that\'d be FUN!

AWW!!! I love Sin and Eddie together!!! They\'re sooooooo good. Thanks for updating! Why do I feel Zip is going to cause trouble?? arrgghhh ... =) cant wait for another update!

whopeee,.......u updated again..took longer this time but trust it was worth the wait..........Eddie is just so sweet ......:)
waiting for an update...........atilll waiting............stilllllll waiting.....
ok gues i gotta wait a little more than tht.......im still waiting................
Nish

**sheepuish grin** sorry about all the earlier spelling mistakes........IM STILL WAITING..........................................................................

I am just now able to read the last couple of chapters. Fucking awesome. I love the way u describe ur love scenes. Really hot. I am so glad Eddie and Sin are finally Eddie and Sin. For the time being anyway. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Damn you and your artistic abilities!!!! Yes, I do consider writing an art... cant give anyone a pencil, or word processor for that matter, and have something GOLDEN turn out like it does with you. Again, I cant find one thing to gripe about, which is becoming increasingly more frequent.... also odd, cause Im a very picky person. Just more kudos to your abilities. I think I\'ll have to come kill you if you stop, though. I wont know what to read!!!

LOVE THAT SIN AND EDDIE!! SIN AND EDDIE FOREVER!!!!!!!!!

(snarls) WELL at least you had a DECENT REASON! THe story is really picking up and the relationship btwn eddie and sin is progressing nicely. Now at the end I got scared..I get this feeling that Eddie will see sin/zip at the diner and something might happen. Like i dunno...a violent protective side might come out.....but u listen here missy! from the prequel a trust issue came of lianne and joseph, if u do this to sin and eddie I AHVE SOME DEMANDS

one: update faster
two: dont keep them feuding for very long
three: try to get in a eddie bashing zip thing.....if u can swing that :P

also...i get this feeling...prolyl cuz im adhd and stupid (cries) that something in zip will stir and he will become violent with sin b/c of eddie and something will happen..please dont be too mean when u write this.

btw...WHY WONT YOU email me back...or go on msn add me to ur list...add me with s/n deadlyhib@hotmail.com id like tot alk to u and hang out..

btw...excellent chapter!

I hope u update tomorrow as an apology to us readers (snickers)

Awwww... What a sweet, fluffy chapter. It made me feel all warm and squishy inside. lol Anyway, I just have to say that the dialogue in your stories CRACK ME UP. You are so talented at witty reparte. Oh, and ten points and a gold star for having Tavian call Sin a wench. I love that word, though I\'m not really sure why. o_0 AUGH! Zip pisses me off. He\'s like the epitome of stubborness. If he really cares about Sin as much as he says he does, he would give her some space and let her breathe. Asshole. Guys suck. Except for Eddie. He\'s such a sweetheart. I hope Sin doesn\'t screw anything up while she\'s at lunch with Mr. Dickhead...

Enjoy the time with your family, and update whenever you can. I\'ll be here waiting patiently. :o)