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what are you planning witht this zach character? -points accusatory finger-

lol! this chapter was sooooo sweet and funny and i\'m so glad that Sin and Eddie are getting so much closer. though i\'d love for you to incorporate more Madison and Lianna in here, they seem to be a fairly close knit bunch of friends, especially since Lianna, Madison, and Eddie were all friends before Lianna met Joseph and Joseph, Tavian, and Sin were roomies before. it\'s a nice symmetry.

and are you through with Zip yet or was that just a ploy for readers to think there was some resolution between Sin/Zip? hmm...things to ponder...

looking forward to your next update! keep up the wonderful work!

No no no no no! Dont let him get insecure!!! He needs to just learn to let it fly! Sin is so cool how could someone not love her?! Im sure she can tell he\'s feeling weird too! =( Ack. this should be quite interesting. I hope Zach doesn\'t judge a book by its cover because Ill get quite pissed. Great writing!!! Keep it up!

Nice chapter. they manage to resolve the issue before it became an issue. But shouldn\'t Zip be back soon now? How will he react when he will face Eddie.

Talk abotu a quick update! I thought I had at least another day or so to review that last chap....apparently I was wrong. Not that I\'m complaining..oh no, not doing that, definitely not.

So the chap before this one, yes very nice, I love how you still have them cutting it up with each other like that. But I still worry bout Zip-o there. I mean he\'s not one to give up easily cause he\'s used to gettign what he wants eventually.

And in this chap. Poor Eddie, already feeling insecure bout things. Someone tell that man to chill. Granted I think I\'d have felt the same if it were me.

I\'m so happy things are going great for them though! Talk about those long hard nights. :P
but my question is, why is Eddie worried about this best friend meeting Sin? What\'s he hiding?

Reviewing chapter 13, this chapter really showed how Sin and Eddie\'s relationship will work but it’s the people outside of the relationship that will complicate or interfere things, I think. I don’t mean to sound anal but you made a spelling mistake in paragraph three instead of putting Sue you put Sure. Thanks for updating.

Reviewing chapter 12, Sin and Eddie are so cute in a non mushy way. I believe you when you said that it will get complicated again and I’m pretty sure Zip is going to be the cause of it. The last two paragraph of Zip’s thoughts made me puke because of his arrogance. His determination is kind of appealing but he has to eventually back off. Thanks for updating.

one of my fav things about you is that you take some time out and respond to your reviewers. that you dont just demand reviews. it is away to really let us know that you care about your story, if that makes any sense. i cant wait to see what happens when zach meets sin. and i don\'t blame eddie for being jealous when he saw zip and sin together either, it is a natural reaction. keep up the great work and update soon

awesome thx for updating so soon, but please, dont hurt their relationship(sin/eddie) please,like zach and sin go way back or something, i just want thigns to work out /cries dont u fuck anything up tirchie!

awesome chap

You probably get tired of hearing my praise, but too bad, DAMNIT! *laughs* The day I read your story and DONT like it... well... lets just say we dont have to worry about it anyway, right? Youre too damned good for that;) Now, give us a drama filled next chapter... I cant decide which of your stories I like the most you know. Its one of the things I hate about you. Cant pick one... so I\'ll tell you what; I\'ll just take the author:D

Argh! What a way to end the chapter! I think I\'ve said this before...and it sucks everytime you do it ^_^ *sigh* So, now I have to wait to see why Eddie is all nervous about his girlfriend meeting his best friend? Great...I\'m going to be a wreck until the next update ^_^

I think, that when you first said something about writing this story, I told you that I hoped you would, but I that hoped you wouldn\'t make Sin all \'oh, I\'m so in love\' bleh girly, because she doesn\'t seem like the type. I think you\'ve done really well at balancing her personality between a girl who\'s totally hardcore and, yet, still a girl (even hardcore girls need to be girly every once in awhile ^_^). Your writing just gets better and better, which, obviously, it should ^_^ It\'s been an amazing progression to watch.

Keep it up! I\'m so totally a loyal fan/reader!