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for Original Sin

by Tirch

person Lozz
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole story and loved it. I enoy all of your stories and at first i didn't know if i would warm up to this one, but in the end i have to say it's my favourite. I didn't really like eddie much in the last story, but he really grew on me and i absolutely love Sin. I'm so glad that you have written a story about Sarah because there is so much potential in her character. I'm going to read that next.
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! I like how you brought in Joseph and Lianna and made them significant in this story, a lot of times when there is a "sequel" the original characters only have a cameo. I spent 2 days reading all three parts and my but is soooooo sore!! Thanks
person Wolf
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u can dig zip all u want just no breaking eddie/sin....btw....imo, this is the best story uve written, very nice
person iotc247
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work and nice ending. It is nice to see you will be continuing the circle of family and friends.. I am sorry for the late review I just got my electric back on due to Hurricane Wilma. Good luck with the next.
person doris
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE ur story, its one of the best I\'ve ever read. Hope there will be a cliffhanger with a happy end for Zip ;) *pray*
person Cariad
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And you know by now that I hate them ;op

Anyway, it was very nice, after giving me a big fright you brought them closer.

And the ending was perfect!!
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing chapter 21, awww that was an awesome end to have Sin say, “I love you” to Eddie. He definitely deserved to be told that. I love it. I’m telling you Ohio is for lovers. I have a feeling Sarah is going to drive her brother nuts. Thanks :)
person RedSnake
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be the cutest and coolest thing if Zip and Sarah got together. Oh the romance! :) P.S. yet another wonderful job.
person Lady Rain
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Oh man!! I promise I\'ve been reading!! I just been busy too, so these last few chapters I didn\'t even read till justnow...

but wow, what a great story. And such potential for a trilogy, I can\'t wait. And finally at the very end, Zip has made it to my good list.
I have to tell you, that whole cliff hangers you did there......not even funny, I so cried. I was so worried that you\'d have thrown in some huge plot twist about it all. But I\'m glad you made it even better.
I like warm fuzzy happy endings too.

Man this was so worth the late hours reading!

person foamyfan15010 (NSI)
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You betcha \'long live the queen\'! lol Awesome ending, really. I almost had a tiny seizure there for a second, but Sin made the right decision. Anyway, now it\'s Zip\'s turn. No, I don\'t really hate him. I just knew he and Sin weren\'t good for one another. But now that Sin\'s with Eddie, it\'s time for poor Zip to find someone. Maybe Sarah...? ;o) Fantastic job as per usual, dahling. lol I can\'t wait for Sarah\'s story. Good luck!

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