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by RedFox

person AkaTsuki
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woh... I spent half of that story thinking that Johna was cheating on his much beloved boy friend... IT WAS DELICHIOUS!! lolz... Yay
person DrkDreamer
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m book marking this story for those times when my own fantasies don\'t quite measure up.

Love how you intertwined the lust with humor. Glad you needed to \'take a break\' - looking forward to delving into your other stories, too!
person ShannonRotten
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm

that was...erotic, i suppose, but amusing in a way, also. some of the words...for example the thing about his elongated member or whatever it was....hahaha.

but serious like, good story, niiice, dude.
person nea
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so very HOT!!! Reading about Johna working through his fantasy via a little self lovin\' has left me slightly flushed and a little lighted headed. Reading this gave me a \'Wish I was there\' feeling. To be in Sebastian\'s, then eventually Christian\'s, place would be wonderful. Having a front row seat as someone \'physically\' fulfills one of their sexual fantasies by their own hands (with a little verbal direction) is something one like myself could only dream of! Courtesy of your excellent descriptive writing skills, you\'ve allowed my mind to come up with some deliciously wonderful mental images. Thanks for recommending this sidestory and I\'ll be on the lookout for more from you in the future!
person Tom
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so wait, Bastin and johna were wanking and Christin walked in... was there a threesome at some point -moan- oh god naughty thoughts naughty thoughts naughty thoughts. I think i may have just cum in my pants. anyways, i must go lovely and hehe i love the side storys. perhapse one with Christin and Bastin... yumm
person AkumaRyu
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good... except I got confused... xD; Umm yeah. It was still good though!
person Pleasure Spiked w/ Pain
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeaks* Oooooo. I loved it ^.^ Wonderful writing, please never stop.