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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww dont make him bad...well maybe he could start out bad annd then b good or w/e. i like it so far annd i hope u update soon
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! You can't do this to me! I want to know what happens next! Why does he know her language? What is he planning? How does she get to Kateri?
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was an awesome story. i enjyed your writting style. keep writting dude.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very nice. A good mixture of erotic with a geniune plot, I enjoyed that a lot.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going and post soon and post a new chapter
bye bye
bye bye
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh! whats he gonna do? i hope its nothing bad.. this ones a bit more lusty than little one but i still love it! well idk if you can call rape lusty on her part, i feel so sorry for the poor thing! but thats what makes your stories so interesting to read, the wonderfully innocent connection between the the girls, both mai and jess. i\'m really loving this story so far! keep writing!!!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story keep it up
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was good keep going but post sooner
bye bye
bye bye
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please dont forget about this story, lol you cant leave us hanging like this!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it please update it