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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it thus far... but I don't find the 15 year time deal realistic... not to mention for two chapters it wasn't much writing. Albeit I still <3 it
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
Out of all those people, only a few had the decency to review?
That's just wrong.
Anyways, I like it, and I would love for you to update. So please do it soon ^-^
Out of all those people, only a few had the decency to review?
That's just wrong.
Anyways, I like it, and I would love for you to update. So please do it soon ^-^
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, even if so little people review it's ok because you are a very good writer who takes the time to go into motives and some of the details that people don't know make a story good. so just hang in there ne?
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if you don't care, why are you asking us to review? and quite honestly, this story's idea and main plot, I could write a full length story in the time it takes you to write one chapter. there is no development in the plot and your quotes are inserted rather painfully in the midst of painfully written paragraphs. if you're too busy to write, that's fine; we understand. there are a lot of authors on this site who tend to update once a month, if that. but to put up something that really goes nowhere is an insult to the reader who has waited quite a while for you to update. just thought you'd like to know.
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree totally. I have all kinds of hits but no reviews on my stories. So I read yours and Now I am reviewing.
I had some complaints. The chapters needed to be spaved more. The formatting was basically the biggest problem. Otherwise it's a good start. Stop by sometime and look at my stuff. If Authors can't support each other on here, who can?
Starfyre
I had some complaints. The chapters needed to be spaved more. The formatting was basically the biggest problem. Otherwise it's a good start. Stop by sometime and look at my stuff. If Authors can't support each other on here, who can?
Starfyre
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hate people like that they have all the time in the world to read a story but not a minute to review it!! so i always make sure i do
i really love how this story is going so far and can't wait to read more:)
i really love how this story is going so far and can't wait to read more:)
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bo offence, but you've no right to complain. This story is worthy of much a review.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O older people shmex. XD awesome. keep it up
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I will review...think its very cool and i love the fact that she\'s 44..and hot lol
but honestly great story two very interesting characters and pretty please keep going!!!!!!
but honestly great story two very interesting characters and pretty please keep going!!!!!!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm.... Great story, and keep going! I know wat u mean about the review deal....