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Niiice Boothy,well done, have a cookie! Please, more!

Very addictive. Loved some of the lines in here. The journal entries almost remind me of my own.

SQUEE!.......are they going to get caught?......is it going to be hot? ((the kissing/making out/i-wish-it-were-more part ^.~))........wow........this is so damned cute, i can't wait for the next installment!............although i keep feeling like something bad is going to happen *tear*.........but if something bad /does/ happen, i hope it's just that one of their parents ((or all of their parents)) find out, and don't like it.........not that one of them stops/doesn't want to like the other any more........^^......oh well! i can't wait for the next update!.......*hugs* ja ne and love as thou wilt!

YAY!!! i love this story of course that is the biggest understatement I can make right now but any more heart felt enthusiasm and I might just explode.

~BAMM!!!!~

To late glitter and sparkly things flutter around in my room as a puddle of "happy me goo" gurgles on the ground.

More please.

SQUEE! SO KAWAII!!!!!!!..........wow.......this story is so.......wow.......i /really/ can't wait for the next installment.........and have you ever read the book 'Geography Club' ? you sory kind of reminds me of it.........the whole tentativeness and everything........although..........they didn't end up together at the end of that book........*sniff* the guy the main character liked was a total ass-hole to him at school..........i just hope david doesn't end up to be the same way.............*hugs* do you think we're going to get a nice yaoi-ful lemon soon? *looks hopeful*..........oh well, whatever you think is best, love..............*another hug* ja ne and love as thou wilt!

Yea, I've read Geography Club. I was upset about the ending too.

Anyway, yea, probably no lemon for this cuz well... THEY'RE 14!! I would feel so wierd writing that if I did it. But I'm glad you like my story.

Perhaps I'll write a lemon type story about them either a) whenever I finish this or b)as a future type story (like it takes place when they're older)

Leave more comments people! I love getting comments!!!

wow, that was the first thing that I thought when I finished reading your fic. it was pure pleasure to read it so first of all thank you for creating it. secondly,thank you for being my first non profit ORIGINAL author (and what an awesome author you are!). lastly, if the 10th chapter is the last I WILL PERSONALLY KILL YOU! you absolutely MUST update and I will look forward to another chapters.

Thanks everyone for all the loverly comments. And, don't worry, there's plenty more to come. I think I'm only on like page 30something with this last update and I've got 55 pages written so far and more coming out every day (well, more like once a week).

Grrrr. i went to review and it did that evid could not connect to server thing. Serves me right though for always reading fics at 4 in the morning. Oh right...rambling again. I loved the story! I've never read a story in diary form, but I love this style, it was great! Poor little guy, bein toyed with like that. Oh well, at least he got to kiss a hot guy. And what a perk, finding out the guy you've been secretly crushing on likes you back. Do you know how rare that is?! Especialy if it's another guy, in high school no less! Some people just have all the luck. I like your style, keep it up. Happy writing!

PS: I'm ashamed of myself. Shamelessly pimping my stories like this. But If you want, or have the time, I'd apreciate it enormously if you'd read my stories Artificial love, or Escape from pain. They're both in the anime/Inuyasha/yaoi section. I don't know if you read Inuyasha fanfics but I would be eternaly grateful if you would.

Bye's

chapter 1: funny love it
*goes to read chapter 2*