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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? Shinra is a traitor? Did I read that right? Oh my! I can\'t wait to see more, how exciting.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your story, keep it up. You are a wonderful writter.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he-ey... I saw it was updated but I think I\'m kinda off this story... I\'m flighty... sorry...
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, this seems really good! I just need to ask, this is a happy ending? Please tell me it is, but if not, I\'m GONE. No angst for me, I\'m that kinda person. I\'ll be on the lookout for this again, and please answer me...?
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So qwuick!
Anyway, with the subordinate thing. Uh, were we supposed to get that? I didn\'t... maybe I\'m just dim, it\'s 1:49 but please explain further later... like duh... and HEY, you definately didn\'t nswer me, though I have a fair idea that it\'s yes?
This chapter surprised me. The common thing to do would be to leave the sit at him dropping in every now and again, her helping him, the whole thing going down, and only later her getting found out etc. So I suppose you were being orginal. Seemed a bit quick, the question is, \"what will you do nbow, where can you go now?\" but if you answer it with some excellant unque plot, whooo you!
Anyway, with the subordinate thing. Uh, were we supposed to get that? I didn\'t... maybe I\'m just dim, it\'s 1:49 but please explain further later... like duh... and HEY, you definately didn\'t nswer me, though I have a fair idea that it\'s yes?
This chapter surprised me. The common thing to do would be to leave the sit at him dropping in every now and again, her helping him, the whole thing going down, and only later her getting found out etc. So I suppose you were being orginal. Seemed a bit quick, the question is, \"what will you do nbow, where can you go now?\" but if you answer it with some excellant unque plot, whooo you!