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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice hook to start the story with. I think you should really keep going with it. I would explore all of the deprivations you can think of, while keeping somehow human in the process. Maybe she should find a way out at the end, the lottery, a rich man, a rich woman, come up with something.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How sad! I hope to see another chapter soon!