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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I just finished reading through chapter 8 and I hope that you continue writing because you are one of the better writers I have seen. Keep it up.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story so far... I think the cathouse should be this good but mysterious thing... update please!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I kinda like this story, so i figure i\'ll comment and you\'ll keep writing. My one suggestion would be to try to make your clifhangers more intense so people come back and be like \"I have to know what happened... Hurry up next chapter\". But that\'s it. Your doinga good job. Never stop writing if you don\'t get reviews, just let your reviews be the number of people reading your story.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh more more. I would like to see her go there
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read all of the chapters thru chap. 7. I thought I had reviewed this but I must not have.
So far I love it! I think the Cathouse should be like they said, an elite club for the rich and older crowd! Who knows what fun that could turn out for Marie.
And I find her relationship now with Ben has a few possibilities. Please continue! I love it!!
So far I love it! I think the Cathouse should be like they said, an elite club for the rich and older crowd! Who knows what fun that could turn out for Marie.
And I find her relationship now with Ben has a few possibilities. Please continue! I love it!!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad not bad keep going
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Never been one for girl/girl action, but it was decent:) Please update soon!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very intrigued, please post some more!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Very nice gothic feel you got here. good!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can,t wait for more