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for L'Onde Amère

by UndeniedEden

person Loopypants
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how scary!
person Undenied Eden
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marie,

Yes, I\'m an big fan of some of the stories in this section, so I do know what the stories here entail. However, it is clearly stated that this story is a WIP (work in progress) and it will eventually with later chapters turn into erotic fiction. I believe I am not the only one in this section who has a plot to their story which includes sex. Patience is a virtue after all. Thanks for the compliments though.
person Marie
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think this is in the right section. have you read the other stories here? I thought this story was well written and interesting, but not what I was after in a fic here. Thankyou for writing.