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for A Measure of Torment

by Korde

person LucyWanabe
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing, I'm glad I found a fic writer that doesn't completely destroy their story with bad writing...yours is very well written and I'm so, so glad I found that is.

I have just one question: is Laureaux (I'm pretty sure I butchered that) a vampire? ^_^
person amberley
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kickass story. but you should put it in the vampire section, and let people know its a vampire story in your summary. becuase tons more people would read it then. and youd get reviews and stars more. but. this is a really great beginning to an awesome vampire story.hope you write more chaps.
person Moe
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must continue!! >< I must know what Adrian looks like, truly! I can only imagine his eyes. But Gabriel... ooh, he sounds most wonderful. ^_^