rate_review Reviews

oh interesting I wonder what\'s going to happen next please update soon

I must say thought this story was really good, and very intriguing. What do you have in store next for us readers. Update soon.
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interesting please update soon

a very interesting story I hope you update soon this is getting good.

hey, this is really interesting so far and i hope that u add a new chapter(s) soon.

sounds like a good story you got going here.. update soon

Hmm, I totally skipped the dancing part - I\'m kinna ired it\'s late. Who is the guy? Duncan? Semmed kinda brotherly... Oh I don\'t know. I want more...

I like it so far. I, like the first reviewer, skipped over the dancing part. It just didn\'t seem to need to be so detailed, I think. But the characters are interesting and there\'s already a ton of questions the reader wants answered, so that\'s a very good thing. As a recommendation, I just say try not to be so specific about everything; description is good, but (for example) we know that when someone goes to open a door, they reach for the doorknob and turn it. Overall, though, a nice start, and I look forward to reading more.

Oh, and I like the chapter-by-chapter alternating POVs.