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for Happy Birthday

by lionessRampant666

person Deviant
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Could be very good it sounds, please continue.
person kevins_girl8807
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yes...please keep writing... i loved it. i ALWAYS read the bro & sis ones...i can\'t resist...lol ***giggle***
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, that was good so far. keep going i wanna see what happens. thanks for the good review on my story, My nightmare, it meant alot to me. :)
person !xobile
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely!!!Update please!You got a good start!
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...i\'m definately intrigued

post more when you can!
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s really good keep writing very detailed good job
person Xavi
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s great; post more ^^