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for A Cold heart

by PisOgPapir

schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ I thought you had left me =)
I\'ve started at the sequel at fictionpress.com but i might as well upload the new chapters here too.
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very fast-paced and action-packed. Your story always made me eager to find out what was going to happen next. And an undead angel would make a very neat ally.

Love,
Falcon
person James
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good few spelling mistakes though
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll tell you this much: Its not good. It\'s gonna be dark. Very dark. Thats all i\'m gonna say i won\'t spoil the fun just yet ;)


~PisOgPapir
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Zombies, skeletons, a winged monster, and a lady angel in full armor -- there\'s certainly no shortage of interesting creatures in your world! I\'m quite curious to find out what Michael will discover when he reaches the island.

Love,
Falcon
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
only one way to find out isn\'t there? I\'ve wrote the next two chapters on paper and i\'m converting them to digital to upload them atm.
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks i\'ll get that fixed right away =P
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot twist! I sure didn\'t see that coming. I wonder what\'s going on with this runeblade?

Love,
Falcon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very intriguing beginning. You certainly get the action going right away -- that really pulls the reader into the story. But I have to mention one tiny thing. A \"prologue\" takes place before a story, while an \"epilogue\" takes place afterwards.

Love,
Falcon