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for Jesus and Lola

by juneprota

schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, juneprota,
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
It's a cute little fic, I like it:)
person Lania
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, but i dont see why it is in 3 chapters, since it is short enough to be a one chapter story.
For a first attempt it is nice
person susuc
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sequal plz!!!!!!!!! Jesus and Lola/Drew are such a cute couple
person some chick
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there\'s some really good prose here, but i wish it was longer. like it cuts off when things get interesting. the lack of details maybe why. again good story i just think you need to rework it a bit.
person susuc
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus is stupid. (hehehe) He should have taken Drew (gets Lola too) instead of Shiela. :-(
person supercaptain182
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending. So cutey and smoopy! Glad to see that Jesus got his life together!
person susuc
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what did he get??? Oh I like the story too. ^_^v please, continue.
person supercaptain182
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Has a lot of potential. Hope you update soon.
person Anonymous
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hay Zeus.
Please don\'t lave me hangin’ on like a yo-yo.