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for Turmoil Behind The Mirror

by Asatoth

person Tsuki S.
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your welcome! I enjoy reading this story, and trust me *grins* I like gore, freakishly as it is it never annoyed me hehe please update soon?
person Manuel
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Schön... I like the main character... so groomy that is beautiful... the twisted obsession with mirrors... I happen to have mixed feelings about mirrors... so... it juts caught more my interest... The philosofical aspects are well thought... or felt... Well written... a special applause to the author for the level of English used, impressive... (English happens to be not my native language as well... as you my notice from my writing)... I\'m really looking forward the next chapters... Best Wisches, Alles Gutes, Grosses Bises, Viel Glück, Bonne Chance, Mis mejores deseos para esta Navidad...

Manuel.... (>>Die Welt machte mich zu einer Hure,
nun mache ich sie zu einem Burdell<<).
person Tsuki S.
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter...for some odd reason I also loved the gore in the other one on what he did to the little girl... I am very well messed up *grins* Is Alexander going to pester Jon? I wanna\' know *kitten eyes* please update?
person Tsuki S.
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo *dies* I wanna\' know what happens to Jon and about that guy that was watching him and how this story will go!! *babbles*.....I have enjoyed your two chapters and I\'m sure I\'ll love and enjoy the others that follow *big crazy grin* I\'ll be waiting for updates!! laterz for now ~ Tsuki
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O should i be worried that i don\'t find this all that disturbing...? well, maybe it has to do with the fact that i read the first chapter a million times as i was correcting it :-P