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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don\'t you think you could use a few more paragraphs? as in like, separate dialog? i look at this chapter and can\'t bring myself to decipher who is saying what :(
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew, Emily is hot! Hell, this story is even hotter. Great sex scenes and nice sexy plot. Keep up the good work.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it and I\'m addictred so it\'s understandable that you got about 6000 hits the only prob I have is that it\'s so scrunched up that it\'s hard to read. Maybe if you work on your format you\'ll get as many reviews as hits
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING AWESOME STORY! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED CHAPTER 3! KEEP UP THE HOT WORK!!!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please. i can\'t wait for more of it.