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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an awesome story!! i loved all of it... i only found one thing that i didnt quite get, and that was at the very end...it says that the dad is now 40, and sarah is 29, so somehow, her dad made her when he was only 11? lol, im guessing that you just didnt want to make the dad too old for jessie, but he is fucking his grandkids, so he is allowed to be a good deal older than them...if he were 50, then it would make more sense, i think. but the story itself was amazing...nice job!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you need to write another like this ... except more food sex & kink cuz that was hott. :P
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. Kinky!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF PEARL did i just read that right. *sits stunned* that was....woooh. i was ust searchign adn came across this and oh my god. *shakes head out of daze. i thinki found my favorite fan fiction site. lol ummmm good story lol but i wish ud had more adults.lol but great job.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot! Hot! Hot! Very sexy story, I love it!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmm. i wouldnt mind role playing that one bit ;)
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay first to review!! Holy Crap is the first thing I wanted to say. That was a great story.