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for Beautiful Creature

by AdamofEve

person midnighteyes
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Tsunami-kun
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Adam sounds really hot. Nami wants to hear more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It\'s well written and has good detail. I want to know what happens. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person sexiie--panda
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dark... i likeeeee itt^^ i haven\'t completely read all the chapters, so i still got to work on that buh i hope you come out with the next chappie soon^^ Well actually i have read all of it, just not in the order it was supposed to go in so i kinda screwed my self^^ aniwias great work!!!!
person Peleia
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I only had time to read the first chapter... but I\'m definately hooked! Great start. =)
person angelwolf
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It has unexpecting twists (namely chapters 3 and 4) wow, I love this a lot!!! Keep up the good work :D <33!!! If you need anything I\'ll try to help you :D
person Sens
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*applause* It was fantastic. The first three chapters could serve as a completed short story. But I know you must have a few more things up your sleeves. Don\'t hesistate. You\'ve got a fan club now.