rate_review Reviews

Hey Bunny.
So when are you writing the next chapters? Loved the story, needs a few twists though. give alittle more discription. play around with the charactors some. love ya. naughty

A story of an elemental, a being that can control it\'s corrisponding element, named Janan. Janan is a slave like all other elements. He was first a slave to a loving and kind master, Enchii. Enchii is murdered and Janan is sold to an evil master, who molests and abuses him. Janan then runs away from this cruel new life, only to be captured by Rai. At the onset of this enslavement to a new master, Janan is fearful at first of what kind of master Rai may be, only to become intimately close with him over time. Quite a compelling and original story. Although it\'s not yet completed, the author has successfully created an enthralling story that is sure to be close to a masterpiece, if not more. I couldn\'t stop reading once I started. Jade is definately a must read.