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by Archangel117

schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiiii

I think that this story is GREAT.
You write really well
And you describe everything so perfectly
And the plot is really good too

Hope you keep going
<3
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good fic so far, great discriptions, and even better... GREAT SEX!!!
person James Jones, II
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come on man, update!
person DurMan
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must continue this story! It\'s great!
person madison
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
give me more!!
person Gentoside
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job, keep up the good work, Please post a new chapter! I liked this one alot
person boo!
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gr8 wrtiting really wanna c more!!!!!!:D
person cid
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz do the next chapter this is just sooo awesome twins bi and sex sounds awesome to me !!!
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent story and excellently written, good job and keep it up
person VASH1234
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved your story and not just because of the smut but it was soo well written!!!! And i never review stories on this site i just really wanna see what happens next! -vash!