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for The Lamentation of Innocence

by LustfulAbyss

person Shivawn
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate Korin. What an immature brat. Even as a former-slave, he should understand what the beatings felt like. Argh! Why would Kuronue be so loyal? I love your stories, though but man I'm pissed off at Korin.
person eagleofdeath
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far! Your portrayals of the characters are believable and your writing is beautiful...Poor Zight though...that must have hurt a lot (well duh eh)...still can\'t help but still like Korin though, the sadistic bastard he is...I await further chapters...
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