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for the new slave

by tahiragirl

person tahira
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yoooooooooooooooooooo this is such a hot story, like continue it, i might be a bit biased cause mi name is tahira also, but like dammmmmmmm, i like the whipping and stuff, orlike stick the paddle up her ass/ vagina w.e. and like ibrator or other kinky hotness, hmm i think that u should put more breast into it and maybe bondage or food like whipped cream and ice or chocolate.. ok im gettin carried away lol, jus liek do w.e u want cause its ur story, but finish it cause its reali good, not like some o da otha shit
latea gurl
person hello
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!! great fic, girl... why don\'t you give us some more???????????
person Steven McCarthy
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story... im still new to this kind of thing... it sounds interesting i think i would like to appretiate something like that from a man as well... ur a very lucky person
person Cameron
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so...how does she do?
person N/A
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I beggeth you, WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!! i absolutly love this fic. it\'s the best of its kind that i\'ve read.
person Cameron
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please....tell us what else He plans to do.
person Leelan
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee! So cool.

Ofcourse you can\'t leave it like that, everybody wants to know what happens next.
This is really great and I can\'t wait for more.
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good you should do more
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it please update