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by Tirch

person Ashley
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, please update soon!
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more now please
person white
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. It was well written and the feeling was outstanding. The story does not feel like a PWP, instead i think it is more then that..you seem to have a really good polt coming through. Hope to see more soon.
person missholliemae
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like another great story; I\'m already hooked! Thanks for sharing - great job.
person papermiracle
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh i like this! you\'re good with erotica....pleeeeeeeeeeeease continue. please?
person Cameron
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good......that was cool to say the least.
person GirlFixer
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really look forward to reading more of this story. I always like it when authors go past their usual genre and try something different, and I can say, you\'ve delivered well. I think this storyline is great and as I said, I look forward to reading more. Well done!
person white
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well written, hope to more soon!
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep, different.
But still good.
person Memory Chase
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you desicribe the surroundings of your story with such detail. Not too much, not too little. I could actually visualize Angeline\'s appartment. I love all of your stories, and I\'m sure this one will be no different.