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for Common

by Tirch

schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy linda historia, muy romantica, ana maria
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
Please continue.
person Empress
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the development of the story. It doesn't look too much like a PWP but sex isn't a bad thing :). Please continue writing. And make sure to explain why Queens as opposed to a mid-income area. That place sounds hella scary!
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHY DID YOU STOP!!!!!?????? it is so good just the way that the two charecters are differnet abd yet they are some how compatable i love it!!
person Serious Fan
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. The storyline is great and the sex scene is hoy! Keep up the good work.
person Miniscule
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this one a great deal. \'Tis very well written, and I like the contrast between Angeline and Javi.
person Nabi
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story =)
please update.. <33
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s a realli good story, i can\'t wait for the next chapter, it\'s got such a good story line to it as well!!~~ ^^
person silent_envy
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought Flame and Leah was my favorite of your fics. I\'m slowly working my way through everything you\'ve posted and they\'re all great. This one, though, I believe may give Flame and Leah a run for the money! I absolutely love Angeline\'s innocence and how Javi is trying so hard to keep his bad boy persona but having to fight it already, the first time he\'s with her. Mmm, and you\'re definately good at the erotica. Off to read more of your oh so wonderful work and I hope beyond hope that there\'s more of Common posted soon!
person katherine
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have read all your story so far and i love the all but when i saw common i felt intersted for what i normally read
and i have to tell you that like common and i hope you will write soon.
P.S
Great job