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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! It seems like it is going a little slow, and the plot twist was great. The slowness is good because some writers seem to rush everything. Please update soon. It\'s a great story.
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! This is a neat story! Keep it up!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good so far. Update soon, okay? It\'s not really one of my favorites, but it is still good. I really want to see how the plot twists further. Keep it up.
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s great! I love how you got Heero and Lilly together, and how Katie is the new enemy! It seems like it is all going good, and then !BAM! Katie turns evil. But how did Katie come back to life? OOOOOH! Please update!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is going well so far. I really like the pairings, though I never imagined Yusuke getting together with Mina. It does seem to fit though. Keep up the good work, and please continue. It\'s a great start!