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Excellent new developements! Aww, Tyr and Tex need to just shag and get it over with already...*cheering them on*. Nicely done, as usual, looking forward to more from you guys!

oh gosh i don\'t know whether to love you or hate you?! that was really good and disgusting! poor tex. i don\'t know how much more of the abuse i can take. please keep up the good work and lt them go!

dudes, i\'d totally watch this if it was an anime! i agree!!
on this chapter....that was so awful, i don\'t know which one to feel worse for. i couldn\'t imagine being in that situation at all, how horrifying for the two of them. and poor ty to mis-hear what tex was trying to say to him. isn\'t that totally the way it happens when your self-esteem is so low though? i think that was very true to life. and you\'re giving more hints on this suzanna person, i\'m looking forward to more details on her (and her brother??? who? did i miss something or is this part new?). i can get through this painful stuff if it works out in the end. i like the pace you\'re setting for them. they didn\'t just say \'i like you\' \'i like you too\' \'let\'s screw\' \'ok\'. i hate when writers don\'t take timing into consideration.
excellent chapter, as always!

Excellent read!!! More please please please. I love the characters, and the plot is progressing smashingly. Nice work.

This story is great, I love your characters. I can\'t wait for the next chapter, please keep writing!

love this story! very hot kiss, and i love the building tension between all the characters. secrets are coming out, so to speak! according to your author\'s note it only 1 review to get a chapter from you....hint :D

You know, it\'s just mean to have a story this good chopped up into individually loaded chapters. When a story is this good, it\'s supposed to be all up at once so the readers doesn\'t get depressed when they come to the end of a chapter.

However, rapid updates are a good antidepressant. So, update soon please!

This is actually the first review I\'ve ever given, computer newbie an\' all, so I\'m usually kinda like a ghost haunting the slashy stories , heh, that\'s just my style,
-sexy grin- Anyway, the reason I\'ve chosen to finally put an end to my vow of silence( I know, you hate me all ready, I\'ve not fed the readers and they will probably die like my poor goldfish -guilt- 0o ) Well, anyway, yaeh, SO... I\'ve chosen to write because I think that you guys story is the COOLEST, and I can\'t wait for the next chapters!
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sO, PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHOCOLATE COVERED CHERRY ON TOP OF SMOOTH, WET, STUNNINGLY ENTOXICATING ICE-CREAM, WITH SUCH WONDERFULLY INTESE FLAVORS THAT IT SENDS SHOCKS OF ELECTRIC PLEASURE STRAIGHT TO YOUR EROGENOUS ZONES MAKING YOU MEWL WITH NEED AND PASSION AS YOUR EYES DIALATE AND DARKEN IN YOUR DESIRE OF THE STICKY, SWEET SUBSTANCE YOU LAVE EVER SO SOFTLY WITH YOUR TOUNGE CREATING SLURPING NOISES, MAKING THE GUY NEXT TO YOU LOOK AT YOU STRANGLEY, AND THE LADY A FEW SEATS AWAY COVER HER LITTLE KIDS WIDE EYES WHO SAYS PLEADINGLY, \'\' CAN I HAVE AN ICE-CREAM LIKE THAT?\"... AND I HAVE TOO MUCH TIME ON MY HANDS, ANYWAY, CAN YOU PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER(S) CAUSE I\'VE BEEN CHECKING IN EVERY DAY AND YOU STILL HAVEN\'T, NO PRESSURE THOUGH, ANYWAY HAVE A NICE, HOPEFULLY ICE-CREAM FILLED LIFE! HEH. HEH. HEH. ... I\'M SUCH A DORK -SIGH IN DEFEAT-
MAN, I SURE DO LIKE CAPS LOCKS, WELL, GOODBYE. 8 KISSES! 8 heh.

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeee! More plz. And stop with all those periods. It\'s becoming too much.