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for Hired Liar

by darkmercies

schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story line is hilarious PLEASE HURRY UP AND UPDATE I cant wait to read what happens between them. And to read what his first impressions re of her in her long skirt. three quater top and boots. My family thought I was nuts when I just randomly started to crack up laughing but ohh it was just so funny!!
person dori
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, hope u\'ll update ur story, coz I love the idea and yur beginning!!!
person amanda
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the way this story is going. its good so far. are you goning to write anymore of the story? i hope you do real soon. i want to know what happpens.
person Alisha
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please don\'t torture us, update soon!
person skolli
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i bsolutely adore your beginning of this story! please update VERY soon! thanks
person tenji888
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i feel...a certain power struggle going on here...

is there something of teh subtle jealous between married mothers and seeking daughters here or am i reading in? excellent at any stretch
person Mercika
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I don\'t really read these kind of stories ( i\'m usually into Harry Potter and Wrestling stories) but this is really good. I can so imagine myself being in this position! I\'m looking forward to seeing what happens ...
~ Mercika
person minna
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha, it sounds good so far and was well written...please update again soon. i really enjoyed it