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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, but I thought the first two chapters were kinda short... in fact I would have made it all 1 chapter, but thtas just me.
Very good though, v. descriptive
Very good though, v. descriptive
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the surprise!!!! VEERRRYYYY well done! i love how you make it seem like he\'s raping her until you get to the end and figure out there in love! good story write more like this!
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damned phone calls!
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow....thats all I can say lol....this is awsome!!!!
and hurry with the next chapter!!!
and hurry with the next chapter!!!