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for Dark Angel

by PhantomsJewel

person jennifer
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story ! I have been looking for a good vamp story for a long time . Yours is the one i like most the lust in it the love that the beast feels , I love it and , I think you should keep it up you have my thanks and my vote for a 5 star rating .
person Shinigami Clara
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just finished reading chapter 3 and will continue after this review..but i just wanted to say: nice choice in the area where the story is happening.... i want to go to New Orleans some day :P have you read Sherrilyn Kenyon\'s Dark Hunter series before? if you haven\'t i think you\'ll like it :D

~Shinigami Clara
person Asasina
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s it? *cries* I can\'t believe they\'re gone now.
You do plan on another story, right? *smile*
person Loopypants
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I\'m glad that you kept writing to the very end:) I hope you start a new vampire fic soon.
person Loopypants
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! I love it. Keep writing!
person Cherie
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do love a good vampire romance!!! Iso hope it has a happy ending. I can\'t wait for more!!
person Silver One
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I really love this work and I hope that you update soon after leaving us with that cliffhanger.
person bellasera
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY you posted it...*does happy dance
person paula
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, please don\'t say that this is it! You must continue. It is so good. Very well desrcibed and it gave me the chills when I read it.
Smashing work!
person Asasina
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Why\'d you stop? That\'s horrible, leaving it off like that. You HAVE to add another chapter soon. *begs*
On a side note, I like the way you write it, making the readers the girl. You do need to recheck your grammer, you have some misspelled words and some words that are there but shouldn\'t be.