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for A Twist of Fate

by WandererInGray

person Quiet One
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story you have going here, please continue.
person yami990
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please. this gets better with each chapter.
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good! I can\'t wait for more- please hurry and write!!
person Beks
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More More More! <3
person FluffyPillow789
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoy your writing style. The first two chapters have captured my interest, and I\'m looking forward to finding out what will happen next. Please post again soon.
person Firered
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, yeah, fine, fine, know that I am hanging onto an update!!!!
person Shai
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrr. Okay. I\'m not going to blow. You wanted readers to from that, but I won\'t - ASSHOLE!! Eeesh, better now.

Huh, the summary didn\'t really do much for me, but the writing etc. tone is pretty good, as much as could be from that short bit, and I loved Rebel and the General so I\'ll be hanging on for more of this. Please update soon...