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for Innocent Seduction

by papermiracle

person Rita
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey dont stop there this is getting really good and interesting
person Phoenix
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far. Hopefully you will update soon. Your Connor sounds alot like a friend I have, it\'s almost scary.
person Blue
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh so sweet, Hurry up will you!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent story--- where\'s the third chapter :) :)....i can\'t wait to see what happens!
person iotc247
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far. Just a suggestion though, please make the chapters longer! That or update more often because Its too good to just drop off the face of the planet.
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please update paper! i\'ve read both chappies, and while the plot line isn\'t the most honorable intentioned, i love the two main characters, how she surprised him, and how they were teasing, and pillow fighting, and like with pillows, couch, blanket, floor..do u think there\'s any way u could let us kno when u\'ve updated?! that would be GREAT. thanks =)
person papermiracle
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you would like me to contact you when I\'ve updated (because i\'m such a terribly slow writer) just e-mail me. Or e-mail me when the urge takes you. Thanks for the comments and I\'m sorry about the short chappies...
-G
person Sheree
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. I hope you update soon.
person Cass
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are going to continue this story soon, right? It sounds good so far.
person Memory Chase
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a good start and you should keep it up.