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alucinante, espero mas capitulos muy pronto, ana maria

preciosa, hermosa, no engo palabras, es lucinante, espero que continues con mas capitulos, ana maria

It seems a shame you never updated this fic again. I like the interaction between Dave and Rae, as it turns this into a good story with sex instead of just a story about good sex. I thought the sex scene at the end of part 8 was a little rushed, almost as if it was over too quickly, without the usual introspection from either of the main characters; if that was an effect you were after, though, then it worked well -- I can see how it could be used to set up scenes in the next chapters with how they deal with the consequences of an act that, while it didn't last all that long, will have profound consequences for both of them. Still, it seems significant that we barely see into Rae's point of view during the sex. Anyway, I hope you pick up this story again sometime. It's a pretty good read, and I'd like to see how the story comes out. Well, that and the sex :D

that was really HOTT!!! but anyways, hope you update soon!

Hot Hot hot

This story reminds me of an affair I was involved in from the age of 16-19...It was hot and lustful in every way. Reminds me of the characters realtionship.

Waiting patiently for more.

Sel~

I like this story better than Candyland. When are you going to update this story :-( Though I do think Candyland is good, he he he.

THE WAIT IS *KILLING* ME!! I\'ve checked back everyday to see if there was an update. Please hurry! This story is very good.

Regards,

DanielaNightSong

Ah, finally, something happens.
Update!

Pretty good. Update soon though..

You have a good story going here. It deals with a forbidden, \"wrong\" type of sexual attraction, but it\'s tasteful and erotic. I\'m a sucker for older man/younger woman trysts, and this story is right up my ally.

Please update soon!