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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your story very much, and am looking forward to part four! Please continue.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elliot he is my favorite character so far.....nice cliffe
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hate homopobes. Poor sorry bastards. Anyway, great chapter. I hope all will go well.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the kind words!
We have only yet begun!
Lots of twists and turns are forthcoming, so be prepared!
Lots of love to all of you!
Cyndiana^^
We have only yet begun!
Lots of twists and turns are forthcoming, so be prepared!
Lots of love to all of you!
Cyndiana^^
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor elliot i hope he makes it
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The drama was definitely present in this chapter. Great job. Poor Elliot, he just wanted an answer. A simple word can so alot of a damage. Can\'t wait for more.
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tis verry good, great job keep it up hun.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey nice start to what looks like a kick ass story...lots of characters to choose from
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good hook. Promising. Lots of potential and good characterization. I\'m looking forward to seeing more.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is really involved. Great chapter. Its cool that you put a backstory to all the main characters in this section. Awesome writing and cool characters.