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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK, why is the average vote still a 4??? Poooo ..
schedule
July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This piece of work deserves an award, IMO. You really had me going in there... Very well written. And the fact is, it is realistic. Nice work.
schedule
July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wasnt expecting that ending, lovely story, well done!
schedule
July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was so good I had to come back and read it again. Its captivated me all day. Its so dramatic and grabs your attention from start to finish. I sequel would be nice, but leaving it where it is is also the perfect ending.
schedule
July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know im gonna regret saying this but it nearly made me cry
schedule
July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is just absolutely wonderful!
I\'m surprised no one\'s commented yet.
Awesome job you\'ve done. ^-^
I\'m surprised no one\'s commented yet.
Awesome job you\'ve done. ^-^
schedule
July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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schedule
July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I love the twist at the end very creative! Keep writing.